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The Weight of the Feather by ~Anubis187:iconAnubis187:



Is my heart lighter,
My guardian of the veil,
Than Ma'at's feather?

Will I continue
Toward the afterlife or
The Eater of Hearts?

I await heaven
Or the ravenous demon
Upon the balance

As you weigh my heart
And its grand morality
On your scale of truth.
©2009 ~Anubis187
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Author's Comments

Okay, so this was a dare from :iconjulietcaesar: to make a haiku about Anubis...I think I did a good job, but I'll let you all decide.

EDIT: changed the last word.

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:iconfallenmercykiss:
Probably one of your best haikus

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:iconanubis187:
Thank you! ^_^

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:iconjulietcaesar:
Oh wow, this was really good. I'm so glad I made you do that dare! :)

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:iconanubis187:
Me too!

I'm glad you liked it ^_^

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:iconmirrorakay:
I think you did an excellent job on this. It flows very well.

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:iconanubis187:
Why thank you ^_^

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:iconguitarish123:
I always like how you piece together opposites in your poems

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Its not much, but I try
:iconanubis187:
Thanks ^_^

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:iconlexariaivy:
i love this, now that i understand what its about. :heart:
also very well written.

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