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     He struggled sluggishly to make his way down the ancient, creaky staircase. It was too narrow for him to bring his cane, making it all the more arduous a task. This disconcerted him little though, for he had finally found it! After years of hiding, he again discovered the book he had once seen in his childhood. It had been nestled under cobwebs and dust, crammed between two large, unmarked novels in the utmost corner of his gloomy attic. It wasn't what had driven him up the staircase to begin with, but it would definately suffice as a pleasing alternative!

     As he stepped out onto his wooden living room floor, he placed the grubby, tattered book on the coffee table and sat, rather exhausted, in the nearby chair. The chalky yellow lettering peered up at him invitingly from the worn leather cover. He picked the book up and blew the dust spiralling off into the apartment. The letters, however, seemed almost transparent, impossible to read. He took great caution as he exposed the pages, attentive not to tear the already deteriorated bindings. To his bewilderment, the pages were of the utmost clarity, and almost light as a feather. He was unfamiliar with the tale at first, but as he continued along, certain details began thriving in his memory.

     Nearing the end of the fable, it became increasingly bothersome to read, the pages turning to anchors, and quality contracting severely. They became brittle, leaving dust on the tips of his fingers, and indents where he touched. It seemed, he thought, that the book aged the further into the tale he delved! On the second to last page, it ended abruptly. The novel came to a premature closure, with one almost shredded, unfilled page glaring up at him. Until this point, it had begun to seem eerily familiar, almost shadowing his memory. As he shut the book, he noted a change. A deep red glow leered at him from the center of the cover.

     As he brushed the last remnants of dust aside, the maroon radiance peered abtrusively into his soul. His name scowled at him from the worn leather.
©2009 ~Anubis187
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Short story...hope you like it.

The Book of Life
The first in a series of nine.

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:iconfallenmercykiss:
Scary :) awesome. :P how delightful fun :) clever idea , lol i think though.. cain.. is a name, and cane is the .. right form as in a walking stick... :) but i love it. made me go whooaaa at the end.

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:iconpankakes91:
:XD: this was entirely enthralling and VERY interesting!
you really had me going with what the book was, and what was going to happen :)
i've never read anything this short of a short story that had as much impact as these 3 and 1/2 paragraphs!
it occured to me what was going on with the book when you said that at first it seems fuzzy, then as it went on it got clearer, then, even farther, brittle and fragile. that was great foreshadowing :D
amazing twist too, and wonderful wording (which you already knew you had a gift for). descriptive without dwelling too much on insignifigant details. you really stayed focused on the details to the story, and the message as well.

another very well done work XD XD XD

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:iconanubis187:
wow, thank you so much! I love the positive feedback! ^_^ :hug:

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:iconanubis187:
lol oops...haha better change that.

I'm glad you liked it ^_^

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:iconpankakes91:
:hug: no problem! lol
your work is always a joy to read, depressing or not (wow, if that wasn't a contradiction) lol

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in the process of lots of things...
currently without steady access to internet...
will be back asap! :)

new writing club,
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[link]
ScribeSanturary!!!
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:iconfallenmercykiss:
mhm

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:iconanubis187:
haha, yeah...I need to try and make something not so depressing...

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:iconpankakes91:
lol there's nothing wrong with depressing! i love reading things that make me think, and mostly those are depressing, but it would be entirely interesting to read something not so "grrr" from you =] a new experience is always welcome lol

myself, i'm bipolar, and that is definitely shown in my various writing, lol

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:iconanubis187:
I just have trouble writing with meaning when it isn't depressing. It either has to be depressing, or depressing twist at the end, like The River, or The Book... =\

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:iconpankakes91:
*nods* yep i've had that problem before. the only "positive" stuff i can write is love, and then it has to be difficult and complicated, but in the end, it always ends up good. or hot/steamy/passion. that's always fun XD lol

i'd say just think up something that has a depressing message, but make it end well, even if it's surprising. you don't have to explain why, just make it happy, and portray those emotions. that's the only advice i can give you ^_^

you know, i'd really love to have your opinion on my writing, if you ever have the time to read any of it =] of course it's not necessary, but i'd greatly appreciate it :)

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